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May 22, 2013
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  “You really need to stop hitting her, Roma.” Antonio responded.

                “I fucking know.” Romano sighed.

                “Why don’t you try bringing her flowers or something?” Antonio suggested.

                “Because I know she doesn’t like that crap. Anyways, she wouldn’t accept it if it was from me.”


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Time Skip ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

                “(Name)! What happened?” Feliciano asked when he saw you at lunch.

                “Don’t worry about it Feli. I’ll be fine.” (Name) replied.

                “(Name) please tell me.” Feliciano begged.

                “No Feliciano. I need to go now, I’ll see you later. ‘kay?”


                You walked down the halls alone, because you had everything you needed done for the entire week complete and turned in you were allowed to leave after lunch. As you were walking down the hall you started feeling bad for leaving Feliciano. ‘Maybe I should go back and stay for lunch with him. He has always been really nice to me, and he never really did anything to hurt me. Well, nothing on purpose anyways… And, then there’s his brother, the one who hates my guts. What did I ever do to him? Nothing. He has no reason to treat me the way he does. Why do I even like him? I don’t even know anymore.’

                Lost in thought you walked to the school library. ‘How did I get here? Eh, lunch is almost over anyways, and I have study hall with Feliciano next, I guess I’ll just wait here for him.’ You went and sat down in the children’s books section and pulled out a role of black Duck Tape that had many small different colored hearts on it. Tearing off a strip you started repairing a folder.

                “(Name)! You didn’t leave!” Feliciano yelled running up to you. Soon after he hugged you .

                “Is it possible that you could please let go?” You asked him.

                “Of course!” He said and let you go.

                “Thank you.” You sighed.

                “(Name), can ask you something?” Feli asked.

                “Uh, sure?”

                “Will you go out with me?” He asked staring you in the eye.

                You thought about it. Yes you did love his brother, but his brother hated you. Feliciano had always been nice to you, and you had no reason not to go out with him. “I’d love to.” You finally responded.


~POV change~


                “Will you go out with me?” Romano heard his brother ask (Name). He clenched his fist tight.

                “I’d love to.” He heard you responded. ‘I knew it. Fratello gets everything, why would be any different now?’

                “But, Feli I can’t.” He heard you continue. “I’m going to be busy awhile and I don’t know when I’d have the time too; I think I’m free on June 8th though.”

                “Ok!” Feliciano responded happily.

                Romano almost went over there, but Antonio stopped him. “You have two weeks to change her mind, no? Don’t go yell at her, that’ll only make things worse. I’ll help you.”

                ‘Two weeks’, Romano thought, ‘with the tomato bastard’s help I should be able to get her, I hope she’ll forgive me.

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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow a date plan with Feli on my b-day! cool! ^^
Maxernest Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   General Artist
Happy late birthday
xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou very much! ^^
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Will there be another part??
Maxernest Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013   General Artist
its already up
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Yay! :D
GardenGnosticJade Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
Keppalinn Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD It's so cute!
Maxernest Featured By Owner May 23, 2013   General Artist
Thanks keppa
Keppalinn Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, May.
(...June, July...)
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